This
image, depicting a shocking fact in an unconventional way, recently went viral
on twitter. Users retweeted this message with the very obvious intent of swaying
others to never drive drunk. The picture incorporates elements of ethos and
pathos to speak to its audience, as most ads such as these do. However, this
picture makes an unusually compelling argument by looking at the facts from an unconventional
perspective. Instead of showing a crashed car, injured victims, or other
depressing and graphic photos that usually characterize anti-drunk driving campaigns,
this ad takes a different approach. It focuses on the true tragedies of drunk
driving; the long term effects of the accidents. Telling a person that “every
48 seconds, another person becomes handicapped because of a drunk driver”, most
likely would not have a lasting effect on them. It would certainly shock and
sadden them, but it would be almost impossible for anyone to truly be able to
understand this fact if it is stated as such a dry statistic. By incorporating the
fact into a handicapped parking space, something we all see every day and do
not usually give much thought to, the fact becomes less of a dry statistic and
more of a profound truth. Old and young drivers alike can understand this kind
of statement, allowing all drivers to understand the message on a deep level.
This image presents something that will truly stick in a driver’s head and make
them stop and think. Later, if they are about to make a bad decision, they have
a much better chance of choosing to be safe if they remember this simple ad.
Sunday, February 28, 2016
Sunday, February 21, 2016
TOW #18: "Arguments in Favour of Genetically-Modified Crops"
Since
the discovery of genes less than a century ago, scientists have been able to
achieve incredible things in the field of genetics. Studying gene sequences in
any organism is possible in modern science, and scientists are now capable of
manipulating genes to change organisms. This ability to modify organisms opens
many possibilities for scientific advancements, but many are hesitant to meddle
with something as complicated and delicate as genetics. Ben Miflin, Chairman of
the Scottish Crop Research Institute and a member of the British Crop
Production Council, argues in his article titled “Arguments in Favour of
Genetically-Modified Crops” that genetically modified products are advantageous
to society. He addresses the skeptical public that is unsure of how modified food
products will affect their health by presenting facts and statistics to support
his position. Since he is making a highly academic argument, Miflin obviously
includes a great deal of logos in his reasoning. However, he also uses
unexpected techniques such as humor to sway his audience. Miflin uses sarcasm
to address a counter argument when he says, “Critics claim that GMOs may
increase use of chemical pesticides and increase the profits of agribusiness.
Pigs might fly”. In including such a phrase as a reaction to opposition to his argument,
Miflin emphasizes the foolishness of claims against GMOs and makes it clear
that these rumors are false. I strongly agree with Miflin’s claim and his thoughts
on the subject. GMOs, when created responsibly and studied extensively before
being consumed by a populations, should not be feared by society. Utilizing our
scientific knowledge to create them could reduce or even eliminate the use of
harmful pesticides, and could even help lessen world hunger because more food
could be produced. The public and organizations who argue against genetic modification are often not educated
in the field of genetics, and do not understand how farmers have been modifying
crops for thousands of years naturally by encouraging cross breeding and practicing
selective fertilization. Miflin addresses these areas and more in his article,
and makes many interesting points for the acceptance of GMOs into society.
Monday, February 15, 2016
TOW #17: "America's Complicated Minimum Wage Argument"
In an
article featured in US News and World
Report, Danielle Kurtzleben attempts to address the controversial question
of raising American minimum wage standards. With her experience as a business
and economics reporter for multiple magazines, Kurtzleben presents all sides of
the minimum wage arguments to an upper class audience that most likely knows
little about the topic and does not understand how it is relevant to them. Many
Americans are fed up with the top “one percent” making outrageous salaries
while the lower working class cannot make a living off of their earnings even
if they take on two or three jobs at once, but others note that raising their wages
could have disastrous economic consequences. Kurtzleben realizes that this
issue has not clear solution, and cannot be separated into black and white or
right and wrong. She remains neutral throughout the piece, choosing to make her
argument not about which stance the audience should take, but about why they
should care and think carefully about the debate. By using humor, she is able
to convince readers far removed from the issue to actually care about it. At
the beginning of each of her points, Kurtzleben poses a possible audience
statement and then reacts to it. One paragraph begins “I mean, I make $60,000 a
year. It doesn't affect me anyway whether the minimum wage is $9 or $19”, to
which she bluntly replies “Please try not to be so fantastically shortsighted”.
While this has a chance of offending her audience, it does force them to think
more deeply of something they previously thought had no importance to them. She
concludes her essay by imitating something an ignorant, privileged person would
say: “What a drag”, to which Kurtzleben says “tell that to your McDonald's
cashier”. Even though she does not include a stance on the issue itself, I
wholeheartedly agree with Kurtzleben’s argument that everyone should be aware
of this argument and its repercussions in society. Both socially and
economically, minimum wage laws impact our country in huge ways that, as
informed members of society, all Americans should be aware of.
Sunday, January 31, 2016
IRB Intro: "Four Seasons in Rome"
Written
by Anthony Doerr, a New York Times bestselling
author and Pulitzer Prize winner, Four
Seasons in Rome describes Doerr’s personal experience living in Rome for a
year. After winning the Rome Prize for his earlier works, Doerr is given an opportunity
to live in Rome for a Year with his wife and newborn twins. There, he falls in
love with the city, its history, and its people. He and his wife raise their babies
in a warm culture; learning unique parenting tips from the affectionate locals.
This story seems very interesting to me, since I have always wanted to go to
Rome and have family from there.
Sunday, January 24, 2016
TOW #16: "I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings" (part 2)
As one
of the most well-known and influential autobiographies in American history, I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings by Maya
Angelou has greatly impacted readers for decades. It presents a vivid first
person account on what it was like to grow up as a black female in the South
and California during the 1930s and 40s. Through countless moves to different
states, living with one relative and then another, and struggling to find a
place that really fits her, Maya feels very insecure during her unstable
childhood. This story speaks especially to young adults who are trying to find
themselves like Angelou did, and who can relate to her awkwardness and
insecurity. Angelou’s story is powerful and direct as a result of her choice in
diction. She uses simple and blunt language to tell her life like what it was,
allowing readers to easily connect to her experiences. When Maya transfers to
yet another new school, she says “In the school itself I was disappointed to
find that I was not the most brilliant or even nearly the most brilliant
student. The white kids had better vocabularies than I and, what was more
appalling, less fear in the classrooms. They never hesitated to hold up
their hands in response to a teacher’s
question; even when they were wrong they were wrong aggressively, while I had
to be certain about all my facts before I dared to call attention to myself”
(Angelou 216). Without sugar coating it, Angelou verbalizes all the things
teenagers feel deep inside but never want anyone to know about. She fearlessly
and simply states her insecurities, leading her readers to connect to and
admire her for her candidness. I Know Why
the Caged Bird Sings is a book that stands out from others because of the
unique style used. Angelou very effectively educated the nation on the
challenges she faced and overcame, and let millions of young adults know they
could do the same.
Monday, January 18, 2016
TOW #15: “The Tyranny of the Clock”
“The Tyranny of the Clock”, by
George Woodcock, is a very fascinating piece about clocks and how they have
effected society over time. As a political writer with many of his works
leaning towards anarchist ideas, Woodcock argues in his article that the
invention of the clock towards the end of the middle ages has caused much of
the human race to be controlled by time. The modern world moves so fast that
many people do not have enough time to enjoy themselves, relax, or experience new
things. Instead, working adults and even students must give up their time, and
subsequently, their freedom, to make a living. Woodcock first includes a great
deal of logos in his piece, informing his audience of how the clock has evolved
through ancient times, Medieval, Victorian, until it has gained complete
control over the lives of many today. His use of metaphors and allusions allow his
audience to think about something so common in their lives – watching the clock
– in a different way. Woodcock connects the invention of the clock to the ancient
Chinese invention of gunpowder in saying “The ancient Chinese, for example,
invented gunpowder, which was developed by the military experts of the West and
eventually led to the Chinese civilization itself being destroyed by the high
explosives of modern warfare. Similarly, the supreme achievement of the
ingenuity of the craftsmen in the medieval cities of Europe was the invention
of the mechanical clock, which, with its revolutionary alteration of the
concept of time, materially assisted the growth of exploiting capitalism and the
destruction of medieval culture”. This presents an interesting idea that
something humans invented will lead to their own demise. Clocks control our
society and lives in ways we often don’t notice, but the truth is that they
dictate much of our lives. George Woodcock did a very good job in his article
of reminding his audience that human lives were not always controlled by the
tick of machine and that, by resigning out lives to keeping to a strict schedule,
we are denying ourselves complete freedom.
Sunday, January 10, 2016
TOW #14: On Seeing the 100% Perfect Girl One Beautiful April Morning
In his
thoughtful short essay, “On Seeing the 100% Perfect Girl One Beautiful April
Morning”, Haruki Murakami captures what it is like to inexplicably fall in
love with someone. His creative fiction and nonfiction works have won Murakami
many awards in Japan, where his books are best sellers, and all over the world
through translated versions of his books. While walking down a street in Tokyo one
day in 1981, a woman walking by catches Murakami’s eye for seemingly no
particular reason, and he cannot explain specifically why he is drawn to her
since she is not outwardly especially beautiful. Yet he knows instantly once he
sees her that this stranger is the “100% perfect girl” for him and panics
because he wants to talk to her before she gets lost in the crowd. He thinks
about what to say to her, but cannot come up with something in time. After she
is gone, though, he thinks of a speech he wishes he could have told her before
she was lost to him forever. Murakami uses vivid language to describe his
experience and artfully expand an intense moment with beautiful details. He
uses metaphors such as “Potentiality knocks on the door of my heart” to put
into words all the possibilities he was feeling in that fleeting moment. He
then narrates his thought process, saying, “How can I approach her? What should
I say? “Good morning, miss. Do you think you could spare half an hour for a
little conversation?” Ridiculous. I’d sound like an insurance salesman.” In order
to emphasis the massive internal conflict and pressure he was feeling to reach
out to the woman. The use of rhetorical questions, humor, and reasoning included
in his thoughts makes the essay feel very authentic. The audience feels like
they are inside of his head, allowing them to understand this rather abnormal
and abstract experience that most of them probably have never had. Overall,
this was a very deep and romantic piece attempting to explain why people
sometimes feel inexpiable connections to strangers.
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